So here is the image again. The main change is the neck length. Not sure if it came out right though, let me know. Also added another grab mark, and made the breast mark look like he really dug his claws into her. I'm having real trouble working on the eyes, anyone know exactly what it is that needs changing?
In terms of programming, almost finished the merchant screen, and started working on 'The Laboratory'...
On a highly unrelated note, just discovered this band, and this track instantly made me think of this game: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=avgiqNapUx0
If you haven't guessed, I'll keep asking for opinions on this until it's perfect.
Z
loving the new updates z and being kept in the loop. personally i think the model looks really good and i think the eyes work pretty well. in my opinion the other guys commenting on the eyes might be thinking that theyre a bit too.... milky/cloudy looking. changing the whiteness might help
ReplyDeleteI'll try the suggestion that comment #3 made about the eyes. (not the closing eyes) Thanks though!
DeleteImproved certainly, but in terms of problems I'm still looking at the neck. It *might* still be slightly too long - I can't tell on this picture due to the fact that I don't know the angle of the camera, but I think the biggest problem is the way it joins onto the body, especially on the left hand side. It looks... I don't know, flat somehow? Also,it does certainly look like Rebecca has an Adams Apple - not something women actually have.
ReplyDeleteI don't know how practical this is, but it would be easy to find problems with the proportions if you uploaded a picture of Rebecca in a standard standing pose (front/side/back), rather than dead on the floor. Then, after the basic model is done to perfection, I'd imagine that doing any particular poses would go a lot smoother.
I see what you mean about how it joins to the left side. I don't think there's a problem with the length. The Adams Apple thing is just the shading, or again could be how it joins up on the left.
DeleteNot a half bad idea...
About the eyes; honestly, you're probably better off closing her eyes and her teeth clenched. Not very professional, but it seems like you're having alot of trouble. If you want to try again with her eyes open, try making her sclera more visible, and her iris a darker color to help the colors from looking alien. I can't really pinpoint the problem as well, but if I had to guess it would be the colors or maybe the mascara.
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't say I'm having a lot of trouble, for some reason I'm just not seeing some of the flaws. I'll give the two suggestions about the sclera and the iris a go.
DeleteI personally don't think the eyes are too much of a problem. I think the way you have them now gives her more of the dead look. The hazy glazed-over look reminds me of Deadite eyes off from Evil Dead; kind of like a "dead for awhile" look. Well, I guess keep workin' on 'em and you'll eventually have them down. :p Love the constant updates too! Keep it up. XD
ReplyDeleteYeah, they are meant to have that dead look, and slightly glazed over. I feel that it's just missing some definition.
DeleteI'll do my best! :P
Could you make her smaller, and cocks going straight, hard into her? (about that anal when its curved)
ReplyDeleteAs in, make her boob size smaller? Make a mini-scale version of her? Create some kind of Toy Story action figure with her? Please specify.
DeleteSex images will be on the way once we've got these done.
The eyes look better know, I'll say that much. They're certainly not jarring me out of the image anymore.
ReplyDeleteGood to know :P People generally seemed to notice the neck more, whereas I completely missed it out.
DeleteThe neck is a little to long. They eyes are better too, but still feel off somehow. They look a little big or something. And they the iris isn't very well defined. Other than the issues with the head area, my thoughts are that she should probably look like zombies fucked her. Like, claw marks or bruising. Or bites. Anyway, I'm happy to see the updates! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteIt is? BAAAH! (In a frustrated way, not a sheep way) I'll keep at it with the eyes.
DeleteI'm getting there, I want to make sure she actually looks good first before making her look FUBAR.
Thanks :)
No problem. I love the project. Can't wait for the next update. I wish I could help but three and a half weeks of learning Blender hasn't taught me much in 3D modeling.
DeleteIn a couple update's back didn't someone say they were up for being the voice of the Rebecca? What's the status on that? did you contact her or vice versa?
ReplyDeleteWent onto the forum, signed up, PMed her, started emailing on windows live, and it could be good.
DeleteShe can't record for 2 or so weeks due to her recording equipment being elsewhere.
Also on a side note did you contact the guy who said he could help you in programming and cg stuff? if so then these 2 could be very helpful in assisting you in your work and maybe give you some breathing room Z and try to get as much sleep as you can otherwise you will end up as a zombie.
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The eyes, in my opinion, look like they're drawn on at an angle. The problem is thus with two different perspectives for the eyes and the rest of the face. You may want to try out different shapes to give it the right perspective.
ReplyDeleteShe looks dead ,good job. :)
ReplyDeleteIs her look based off the original or are you creating your own version of her?
Maybe you should use the song in the end credits. Also, I think the problem with the eyes has to do with the black around the eyelids, they look a bit unnatural or copied on. If you thinned the opacity of the black on the bottom of the lower eyelids by half and and maybe around the upper lids you'd get a less pasted on effect. Aside from that good game mechanics for an H-game, keep up the good work to both you and your partners.
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wel about the eyes, I'm not a doctor, but afaik the pupils turns dimmer when someone is dead(and mayb making the pupils a little tinier too), that might help.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you keep going with code work and all.
ReplyDeletethe jaw is to big! why not using a fan art instead of 3D model?
ReplyDeletebtw i LOVE your game! very HOT and great atmosphere! hope to see more dog actions soon! maybe a double dog action :D
ReplyDeleteI've been a Resident Evil fan since 1997, and I really appreciate what you are doing here. Just be sure to keep your game more old school Resi than new school Resi - limited ammo with the focus on survival, not action. Survival rape... Fuck yeah.
ReplyDeleteyeah! im so agree! its much more fun with limited bullets and running away instead of shooting everything!
Deletewhen will the next update be????????
ReplyDeletei agree, i was enjoying the regular updates even if they were just to state that z didnt have much time to put on the project
DeleteSorry, but i dont like 3D Pictures. Not only yours, i never like them.
ReplyDeleteI hope at the finish game are some tentacles and/or rape scene or enemys ;)
I wish this game get successfully and you get enough money for all the work you get with it.
Greeting from Germany.
New update soon maybe?
ReplyDeleteHuh no new post here in awhile... *sigh* i wonder what Zfied's up to
ReplyDelete(sigh) is it sad i check this a couple of times every day? :/
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ReplyDeleteYeah dude, its time to march with new engine with some huge black dude zombie who tears this bitch's anus apart with his undead manhood, forced deepthroat and anal with two of them. i hope u get inspired
ReplyDelete^LOL! someone's deep in the moment ...
DeleteOn another note hope to hear from you soon Z (But no rush :D)
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ReplyDeleteI believe it's high time for a new update, isn't it???
ReplyDeleteAt the very least, its time for a news post informing us of progress. However, I shall not say its a requirement. I once again worry more that something RL has happened that would prevent him from posting.
DeleteIt could also be that whatever was keeping Fapcom occupied is really keeping him occupied, and without sprites to work with there's only so much Z-fied can do.
Ok, miracle won't happen and we have to wait at least month.
DeleteWell, a bit dissapointed, wish I could help with forcing your project, once I did something simular, but didn't have motivation to keep working on it.
It might take more time than you expect. Just a feeling.
ReplyDeleteThe main problem at current is lack of word from Fapcom. Its kinda hard to update the game without the sprites after all.
ReplyDeletehmmm dude i have done some good Sprites in MUGEN 2d fighting engine! if u think my skills are enough i may be able to help u with this awesome game!
ReplyDeleteWhy not show some of them, and then Z-Fied could make a decision one way or the other.
Deletewell i wonder if he will even answer, and first i like to hear if he even want some help! if he does i we can talk about the rest through email
DeleteSometimes spending toooo much time on computer can seriously mess with your head and some things out there in real life might need fixing the more u stay away from them the more they grow. Just my issue. I think he could have something in common with this. I hope u will be back Fapcom, sorry for harsh words in the past i share some things.
ReplyDeleteyeah this game is to good to be dropped :(
ReplyDeleteRandom internet guy's very late two cents, why not find an image of a real person to work off of for proportions and add your style as you please (quick google image search found a woman with a scarf in close to that position "dead woman lying on the floor stock") hope it helps, the project looks great so far.
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